Posts (comments) in this section will be original poems created by West Park Academy students. All students must identify the type of poem they are writing, this link is a great reference for identifying the types of poetry: Shadow Poetry.com
Happy spring! April is National Poetry Month!
Here are the poems of group 10. Please mention the number of the poem when commenting on it.
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Song
Springs Here
Verse1:
Flowers are blooming
The air is fresh
I feel the wind blowing
Right through my hair.
Here is that season
Chorus:
Springs here.
Here are the flowers yea
Springs here
Here come the rain showers yea
Springs here
Yea yea yea
Verse 2:
Im going planting in my garden
The breeze it feels good
Oh yea darling
Spring is the best thing ever
Here is that season
Chorus:
Springs here
Here are the flowers yea
Springs here
Here come the rain showers yea
Springs here
Yea yea yea
Bridge:
The rain showers
The beautiful flowers
The breeze in the air
I can feel it in my hair
Spring is that season
Here is that season
Chorus:
Springs here
Here are the flowers yea
Springs here
Here comre the rain showers yea
Springs here
Yea yea yea
A Song is an expression of a poet's personal emotions, meant to be sung. Lyrics in a song contain
verses (lines that make up a song; sung poem) and a chorus (a repeating verse in a song (refrain).
#22
Sun comes out
People start playing outside
Ride the bikes
Interesting
No more snow
Go to the parks
Acrostic poetry is where the first letter of each line spells out a word usually using the same words as in the title
#34
SPRING
Sun
Plant
Rose
Interesting
Natural
Great
Acrostic poetry-is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
#6
Spring
Spring is here now yes!!!
The birds are singing today.
I love spring hooray!!!
Haiku (also called nature or seasonal haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three
unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually
written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).
#16
Spring!!
Spring hot, to enjoy
That is fun to hang around
With friends and family!!
HAIKU DEFINITION
1) An unrhymed Japanese poem recording the essence of a moment. Nature is combined with human nature. It usually consists of three lines of 5/7/5 (5 kana in the first line, 7 kana in the second line, and 5 kana in the third line) totaling seventeen kana.
2) A foreign adaptation of 1, usually written in three lines totaling 17 syllables or LESS.
#19
Spring time feels so good
Unhappy all the time
Nice for icecream
Night outside
Young people play
Day by day goes by
As the kids play out side
Yesterday was very hot
Summer is here
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.
#17
Haiku
Baseball is played now
Basketball is in playoffs
Spring is here fun time
#12
Best Laughs
Sweet
Precious
Rain
Interesting
Natural
Great
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.
#24
Spring is the happiest time of year
People all love spring
Rain coming down
In spring is when you play and have fun
Now green is starting; life is forming
Green is the color of spring
Acrostic Poetry
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
#4
s spring is bright
p places are right
r rain is warm
i into the coldest swam
n nicest weather
g greenest feather
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.
#32
Special to you and me.
Pleasing to stay out.
Raining as the flowers grow.
It looks like paradise.
Nicest weather ever.
Gently as the air moves.
Full of happiness.
Land of freedom.
Oh! How the sun shines.
Water stream flowing.
Everyone is playing.
Raspberries sent in the air.
Spring is here I can feel it!
#23
Spring is here
Swinging on swings
Playing with friends
Running in the park
I Enjoy spring
New creatures
Getting ready for summer
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.
#15
Spring is here
Swinging on swings
Playing with friends
Running in the park
I Enjoy spring
New creatures
Getting ready for summer
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.
#7
Spring
Sounds
Playing kids
Rain
Isolated parts of grass
New flowers
Glowing people
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.
#28
Spring is beautiful
I love the fresh air
It's so refreshing and feels so right
The rain is so humid
Haiku (also called nature or seasonal haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three
unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually
written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).
#12
Acrostic Poem-Spring
Surprising
Persistent
Rainful
Interesting
Nature
Greatful
Acrostic-It is a type of poetry where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
#12
Acrostic Poem-Spring
Surprising
Pleasant
Rainful
Interesting
Nature
Greatful
Acrostic-It is a type of poetry where the first letter of each line spells out a word usually using the same words as in the title.
This poem makes me think of the summer
#8 Hot Spring
The tall long green grass the smell of refreshment.
Spring is one of the days I look forward to.
The beaches, amusement parks, man I like to play there until dark.
Ride my bike until nightfall grab a ball and hit the court or even run a football for 50 yards.
Spring, man
Spring is one of the days I look for.
Song
#9 “Outside”
(Verse 1)
Sitting in this house bored
Don’t know what I’m doing that for
Man I don’t have anything to do
Yes with my chores I am through
(Chorus)
I want to have fun
Be out in the sun
Want to go on a ride
Have fun outside
(Verse 2)
It’s summer
Not having fun that’s a bummer
Been in this house all day
And it really makes me say
(Chorus)
I want to have fun
Be out in the sun
Want to go on a ride
Have fun outside
I LIKE # 9 BECAUSE THAT REMMINES ME OF KIDS OF SPRING OR SUMMER TO GO OUT SIDE AND PLAY SPORT'S.OR GO TO THE BEACH.
this song is cool it explains well about spring this was a true song I mean if you add a beat then this would be the #1 song lolz
#20
Acrostic Poem-Spring
Surprising
Persistent
Rainful
Interesting
Nature
Greatful
Acrostic-It is a type of poetry where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
#17 is a well written art work
#15 is a ok poem
30
Acrostic poem about
Spring
Standing outside waiting until your friends come
Playing outside with the family
Inside waiting to come outside to play
Never coming out with a heavy jacket
Going outside to enjoy the weather
An acrostic is a poem or other writing in an alphabetic script, in which the first letter, syllable or word of each verse, paragraph or other recurring feature in the text spells out another message. A form of constrained writing, an acrostic can be used as a mnemonic device to aide memory retrieval.
#29 Spring
Sun is shining
Pollen is increasing
Rain is deceasing
Its gonna get icky and sticky
Never ending humidity makes us
Go to an air conditioned spot
Acrostic poetry is a form of short verse constructed so that the initial letters of each line taken consecutively form word
good poem brianna we'll i mean good song
briana this poem u wrote was very interesting in the future i can see u as a female newsreporter
number 30 was alright but it looked like it was easy to do
26
ACROSTIC POEM
Sun
Plant
Rose
Interesting
Natural
Garden
SPRING 13
Sun comes out
People go to the beach
Ride bikes
In the parks
No one wears jackets no more
Go to the amusement parks
SPRING 13
Sun comes out
People go to the beach
Ride bikes
In the parks
No one wears jackets no more
Go to the amusement parks
10
Acrostic poem
Earth
Easter day is almost in earth day
April is earth month
Rain earth in some contries
Thorow the garbage to keep the earth clean
Heavy rain days
Acrostic poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
SPRING 5
Sun comes out
People start coming out of their houses
Run in the beach
In the park they start use the grill
No one use their jackets no more
Go to the beach
#25
Yes The day of summer is here Yes
Yes the days of summer is here. Yes here splashing in the water. Running in the sun. Having fun no do not run from the dog or jump over that log. Yes the day of summer is here you don’t know how fun it is.
Brianna's poem had a lot of flow. I thought it had a lot of descriptive words that describe the spring. I think she'd make a good poem writer.
I think #19's acrostic poem is good and interesting. It preety much describes the sunny days in spring. It also says how much children love the spring. It's a 10 star poem!!
#34 Not bad but I think it needs more things of what are you doing in the spring like run in the beach,play with your friends.
#17 I think is to short needs to have more things
18
SPRING
SUNNY DAY LIGHT
PEOPLE PLANTING PLANTS
RAIN IS COMING
INTELLIGENT PEOPLE HAVE UMBRELAS
GOING OUTSIDE TO SPLASH IS FUN
31
Spring
It is the time of spring
It is time for bells to ring
The sun is glowing
As I am growing
The pets are grooming
And flowers are blooming
The sun goes down
As I turn brown lol
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